Wow ... very nice poetry tho a little bit scary... I like how the image relates to the words of the poem "we won't sit at nights in piano bars ,vainly seeking what we no longer are" this part made me a little bit sad for them.... please keep up the good work, what is the theme of the poem? and what inspired this ?
the dead continue to live in our thoughts and we interact with them in dreams as if they were still alive, but the chapter's closed. It would be unwise to pursue the memories further. What inspired it? Several close friends recently died.
So sorry about that ... may their soul rest in perfect peace