Presence (An Original Poem)

in #poetry7 years ago

You're confusing me
Spinning me around like a top;
You keep me from careening off the palm of your hands
captivated
entrapped
imprisoned

by this situation.
by you.

I am on my toes
eager for the next exchange.
I await it so fervently,
but patiently
It consumes the unfilled spaces
in my thoughts
in my heart
in my life

now there is a presence.
now there is you.


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Captivated
entrapped
imprisoned
by this situation
by you

Very awesome....I love it:)

thank you :3 and thanks for reading!

The pleasure is all mine...

Wow you write good :)

Nice once

I so much love this .... Well inked

Thank you so much! :3

"now there is you" I'm guessing that was the grand finale.
Excellent finish, 2 words that say it all.

Yes :3 I always try to give good finishes to my poems and stories


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