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RE: My Teardrops poem: "The Last Tears"

in #poetry7 years ago

The wound you left me and the scars
I will be shining just like those stars
I'll swear to move on
so that I will be fine soon

That was my best line, but this poem sounds like a deep heart experience of yours and am glad you are moving on, shine like a star you are

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