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Fellow eSTEEMed,
I've never written a poem and was wondering why. Maybe it's because I still find it hard to express myself with words. So as was having a walk today, I thought about the lady I fell in love with and decided to write a poem for her (her name is not Hafsah). I plan to make it a form of anthology and post more on Hafsah' songs. I hope you enjoy it.
This girl.
I want to beat these words,
make it spurn,
make it turn and
make it yours.
I want to sing you a song,
or rather word you a song.
Because my dear, my heart vacillates as I don't know if,
singing or wording can best capture,
the tickling I feel anytime your name comes up.
Put your head on the sofa,rest.
Tell the other guys that you're taken and I'm the best!!
Come let's play a joke,
Lemme see if the love you have for me can make you choke,
Repeat what you heard from me or I'd tie your hands to a rope.
Say "Baby you're the best of the most!"
And if ain't from your heart,I pray that you choke!!!
Let's get a bit more serious and note,
how amazing...."would you please stop stuffing the pillows and listen?"
"OK. I think what I was just trying to say,
that you're the soothe to my pains.
I'm calm when I hear you name.
I see stars when you call me bae.
I'm at my best when I look at your face,
Your words best put me this way.
I'm lucky.
And you should thank your stars..
Men like me are scarce.
I'm the best by far....
Guess what she said.
" Cocky as usual. Just when I thought you were about using your brain,
to conjure magic and rain me praise,
you still find a way...."
She stood and left.
Actually, she knows what I meant.
She is the only one that understands what I say and the words I left.
She knows I'm the lucky one.
And I know that too.
The girl's humble,
So she allows me deceive myself,
Anytime I want to.
What do you think about it? Please criticisms are welcome. I hope to be a better poet someday and write more about my love life.
Good stuff!
Thank you.
You can only get better at it though. Love has become the first incentive to breaking new grounds. That is the potency of love-creativity
@precy123
Thank you. I hope to become better.
Is there a hate-creativity? If yes, I'll love to see something on it.
Great poem
Thank you.
Nice poem. Keep loving her and cherish her.
@seyiodus.
Thank you @seyiodus. I plan to keep loving her for the rest of my life.
Good.
For a first poem this was really nice, please post some more, but please try and split the poem into stanzas and verses better, it'll make it more professional and easier to read. Nonetheless, its a great poem👍👍👍
Thank you very much. I've written another, the part 2 but it's not naija film o. Lol.
I hope it's better this time.
Nice one
Uvote 🙏
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