The first and second poems have so much voice that they speak to the reader with precision - the first poem truly ringing with whisky and drowning plastic... and the second to HS awkwardness..
The first and second poems have so much voice that they speak to the reader with precision - the first poem truly ringing with whisky and drowning plastic... and the second to HS awkwardness..
glad the voices came across so strongly, @lonestarpoet.
i find voice to often be one of my natural weaknesses that i always visit a few times in the editing process, so it's always a joy to hear the time was well spent.