Beautiful freewrite and interesting the way you present your thoughts.
In pieces i shattered
My soul battered
Will i ever recover from this tragedy?
The only one who made me feel a prodigy
I think this is the verse I like the most, it express exactly the pains we face when the one we once loved becomes a stranger.
Overall the poem is interesting. Keep on with the great work @iamceezee.
Thank you..i really appreciate you for your support and encouragement
@snook @simgirl your contributions on this post will be highly appreciated as i'm warming up for the freewrite contest..thank you