Overcome it

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Thank you for reading this.
Thank you for being you.
Thank you for thanking me.
Thanks for seeing me through

It’s painful to face the day
When failure turns me away
But what is failing anyway
Isn’t that lame to say

So when you look at me
See me in your own way
Don’t allow me into yours.
Don’t share don’t let me explore

Down under there is a molten sea
Of Love I burned up so hastily
A truth that lies and a love that hates
A youth so wise a lifted weight

Down deep salt and pepper waves
Distant darkness my body craves
It’s not hypnotizing even though you know how
It’s not crypto mining we both could go south

It’s like a breath of new
Oxygen all in for you
For me I meant
I meant for me
I am sexy when I am not needy

Right
Now
Righteous
Wow

Lonely
Handsome
Cruel
And kind

Only
Man to
Fuel
My mind

I really hated
When I succumbed to it
Broke something sacred
now you’re numb to it

I didn’t think it through
Yes always stayed so true
You kept defending me
Dragons slayed by you

You separate me
from my own sickness
I owe my life to you
I have to fix this

I owe my life to you
It’s rediculous

For you for now
Foreign some town

Rinse my skin from
Demonic sins
Taste Holy
Taste right
Down under
Shining knight

Shoulder tan
Heart pure
Sexy grin
Sickness cure

Planet moves
Cravings change
Damn it you
Make me feel strange

I need to be
Needing you not
I bleed to breathe
Give me what you want

I need to satisfy
Something wild in my mind

You are the answer
I fucked it up
Your a warm decanter
I’m the overflowing cup

Sweet like a river
If I could just renew
I am a giver
I want to give to you

I will need your mercy
Yes I will need it again
I will ask for no more
I will wait to the end

Hope you will see me
As more than a thief
As more than a bad dream
Restore belief

I slide a hand down under land
Upon the throne of the magic man
Sweet suckle in waves in circles my face

My purpose could be
A sweet decadent gift
to make some of this mess
Have a decent uplift

Besides it would be an honor to play
Upon your seismic strength
Quench my thirst for righting my wrongs
Let me absorb your delicious song

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Per usual, I don't think I know what it means, but I do know that grace is a beautiful thing. We all mess up. We all fall short. We all fail to do the good we should and do the wrong we shouldn't. It's beautiful and freeing when we're given grace and able to set down the weight we carried. No more punishing yourself or penance, just peace.

We are not our past _____ . :)

Wise words, you speak! I try not to punish myself too much- in fact I use writing as my tool for forgiveness.

Holly Molly, is it really you Lorilikes!! Amazing! No wonder you are a "skilled writer"!!

That was the sweetest compliment in its own way. Thank you sir! = )
Lol my own words, always. I am so super happy you said that. haha

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
You make me rhyme
I upvote you.

clovers are green
sunflowers, golden
You brought me laughter
Your upvote emboldens.

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@spiritualmax

I like this title "OVERCOME IT" That is a successful life style.

As always amazing ma'am
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Soo Nicee and beutifull..

thank you = )

very nice

"Rinse my skin from
Demonic sins
Taste Holy
Taste right
Down under
Shining knight"

indeed nice
@lorilikes

Thank you it rings a nice tune doesn’t it

Yeah, you can be an awesome song writer....

I need to ask you something???

Ask ⭐️

I have noticed that you have large amount of steem delegated to you....
I would also like to get some delegation, can you please fill me in about How can I get some....
Pardon me, as I am usually straight forward and most people don't like that usually...

I am perhaps unlike most people in that I really appreciate people who cut the small talk and say what is real. Ask what is on your mind and sing loud as possible while in the shower. To answer your question, I suggest you consider leasing some steem power, and it is worth it. You can find more info by looking at the profile of @minnowbooster. I highly recommend it- leasing delegation changed everything. Talk soon!

hahah..Thanks a lot...

well nice on4e ..thanks for sharing

Sure, glad you liked it.

Well nice👌👌👌

thanks bud

The fenix, a symbol of reborn! Really heartfell poem. I really loved this part:

My purpose could be
A sweet decadent gift
to make some of this mess
Have a decent uplift

It just reminds how many times i messed and how many times i had a uplift from friends/family/boyfriend when i was not expecting it.

Glad you could relate darling.

Speechless......really, I got nothing. Nice one!

Awesome, love to hear the words of speechless friends. Cute!! haha

Good poetry you are writing man.I really like it.
Thanks for share.

Happy for you for overcoming. Success is our birthright. Resteemed and upvoted . Have a nice day.