you got drunk, blasted SAD!, and jumped into a pool,
drowning in emotions, whiskey, cold water,
and then you got a text, but it was not from her.
begging her for more and more,
but your wish will never come true.
you reside in the depths of your blue
obsession.
Luka.
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Bro, you nailed this. There are different perspectives to this poem. It's somehow ambiguous and thought-provoking. But that's what makes it amazing. I'm still trying to stand on the perspective of whether he slept with another girl that wasn't his girl...
I guess I'll sort the puzzle myself. Good job bro.
Thank you so much! It’s complex, but it’s this complexity that adds a depth - a new dimension - to this experience! I’m glad you found it thought-provoking and found your own truth in it. Once again, thank you!
You're most welcome.