controversial jottings
the black mascara dried,
permanently leaving your face distorted,
corrupted, seductive, unwanted.
weeks come in pairs of two,
and four it took to kill a fire,
which, when first ignited itself,
was but a mere ember.
this ignition,
and the inevitable demise that followed,
were both pivotal points
which summoned poetic thoughts -
controversial jottings -
for the first time.
©LukaKorba
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With love,
Luka.
This is the 1st of yours I have read and it offers much colourful promise of things to follow. You are aspiringly au fait with this platform and, seemingly, many others. You have my admiration. Be seeing you around friend
Thank you so much for these kind words! :)
Good Rhythm, I like the pace and the way you write.
Thank you! :)