drowning in the ashes

[lukakorba]

drowning in the ashes

those four letters make me shiver.
somewhere underneath the river;
that is where we left the key
to our psychedelic poetry.

drowning in the ashes, i
look up at the foreign sky,
catching breath before i sink
in my sorrows; overthink.

distance is this artist's blade,
which he uses to invade
thoughts, ideas, symbols too;
everything that screams out blue.

deprivation is the act
of admitting this one fact;
promises are overrated;
they make eagles feel sedated.

©LukaKorba

With love,Luka.

Comments

[damianjayclay]

Witty poem with clever use of rhymes which makes the conclusions feel almost inevitable.

[damianjayclay]

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[abernest]

Nice poem he got me thinking .. Congratulations

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[lukakorba]

Thank you!