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RE: there is no fish...

in #poetry7 years ago

fish shimmer, liquid as water
hordes of rushing mice, teeming grains flowing through the tilting mill
hissing sands flow, then hump in defiance
against solar desert winds
pray for stillness

perceive only movement

that's the space between words

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Interesting ending. Yes, there is, or there at least could be space between words. Physical one, meaty one.