I liked how you told a story within a poem. I also enjoyed seeing that you approached a different style than yours. Bravo! The last seven stanzas were a perfect description of the modern society. I loved it!
I liked how you told a story within a poem. I also enjoyed seeing that you approached a different style than yours. Bravo! The last seven stanzas were a perfect description of the modern society. I loved it!
Seven stanzas? That's almost the whole poem! Thank you - yes, I've been trying to 'change' my styles, to become more versatile and adaptable. It's good to be able to write something that you would love reading :D