I'd rather... (An Original Poetry)

in #poetry โ€ข 7 years ago (edited)

Good day everyone! I'm feeling a lot better now. ๐Ÿ˜ Here's a little poetry I made today, or a verse -- I don't really know. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ But, yeah, I hope you're going to like it.



ENJOY! โค๐Ÿ˜˜




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i'd rather sit

here in the dark

and let whiskey

burn my throat --

than lay awake

in an empty bed

that used to be

our home.




Thank you for reading! โค






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I love your pic! nice!

Roses are red and violets are blue, I read your poem and I was like 'Damn', I write a blog but never gets steem, then I though its because of curl but then I realize you get because you are a girl :P :D :)

ha ha ha that's a good one. But I can see you're a newbie. It's only normal that your posts are not so exposed yet. But soon, your posts will earn some as well. Just be patient! โค๐Ÿ˜

Yes.. Its patience.. Im still even waiting for my time.

Don't worry my dear, you're doing totally fine. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Thks ma'am๐Ÿ˜„

@lyxng , oh I see, thank you up voting my comment, it made me earn 4 cents yaay :D, #following

Followed you as well. Steem on, my friend.

Nice lines my dear @lyxng, I just put up another one, check it out. Tell me how u see it. You know you are my mentor in poetry.

You flatter me as always. Of course I'd love to check it out. ๐Ÿ˜€

You are so lovely