GOOD MORNING NATURE

[maflex]

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From the rise of the sun.
The current of the ocean.
The tide of the sea.
The standing of an order.
The ruling of our king.
The downfall of Devil.
The dent of evil.
The spark in the light.
The realm of glory.
The hope to be restored.
The life to live.
To Making another great day.
it's a GOOD MORNING.

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Comments

[arthur.grafo]

That is. Not a. Good poem. It. Is just. A serie. Of one line. Statements.

I'm certain you can do better.

[maflex]

Thanks.
Will improve on that.

[quillfire]

@maflex,

Although my taste in poetry tends strongly towards verse, I find there is something inexplicably captivating about your poem. It's the finale that got me:

To Making another great day.
it's a GOOD MORNING.

To me it's almost a toast ... I want to raise a glass of wine.

[maflex]

Thanks.
Will improve on that.
Still working on some..