RUMIT

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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Rumit

Sore
kala itu mendung
riak hanya sebatas suara
tinggalah jejak pada pasir

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sore
warna jingga bercampur mendung
biru hanya hiasan warna dasar
putih hilang di antara abu

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sore
janjiku masih sebatas tinta
ia masih basah berselimut lipatan
beberapa di antaranya hilang.

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Banda Aceh, 8 Maret 2018

Maksal Mina
@maksalmina7

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sang pujangga . Keren. puisinya ada makna dan arti tersembunyi. gambarnya saya ancungi jempol.
salam kenal @cutagus _ Banda Aceh

masih dalam tahap belajar juga bang @cutagus, terimakasih untuk supportnya. salam kenal kembali bang @cutagus, ulon tuwan di Alue Naga Bang.

Pemandangan yang sangat indah

terimakasih bang @isnarsaputra jangan lupa untuk menikmati puisinya juga. salam.

Untaian kata menjadi bait2 yang indah. Diimbuh oleh foto2 yang membawaku terbang ke alam rindu. 😊

Nice poetry, Bang!

jangan rindu teh @alaikaabdullah berat, kamu ga akan sanggup, biar saya saja. heheh. terimakasih teh, semoga bisa mengenang rindunya kembali, salam kenal.

Pemandangan awan yg luar biasa...saya telah upvote y...?

This post has received a 0.15 % upvote from @drotto thanks to: @banjo.

nice photos. yours?

of course this is a result of my photos, @torico thank you have visited, this is a poem about the picture, but in the language of Indonesia.

Suka. Salam kenal😜

terimakasih kak @puanswarnabhumi, lah kok emot nya kaya gitu, cak mano ni? salam kenal kembali kak, semoga bisa menikmati puisi yg lainnya di lain waktu. tulisan kak2 juga bgus2.

😘😘😘

ini gmana cari mendiskripsikan emotnya kak @puanswarnabhumi

Tapi membaca puisi ini sangat tidak rumit.....

heheh membacanya memang tidak rumit bang @ismansembada, tapi suasananya yg rumit.

Ini foto-foto bagus. Coba salah satu tag -- misalnya tag "esteem" diganti dengan tag "landscapephotography". Ini tag kontes

iyaaaa bang @musismail terimakasih untuk sarannya, mohon bimbingannya dan koreksi jika ada salah, maksal baru belajar menuli dan bermain steemit. salam bang.

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