Heartfelt poem but it leaves no mystery because you're writing too literally. Try to find other ways to express your thoughts and emotions without going the direct path.
Poetry is full of unbeaten paths to get where you want.
Heartfelt poem but it leaves no mystery because you're writing too literally. Try to find other ways to express your thoughts and emotions without going the direct path.
Poetry is full of unbeaten paths to get where you want.
Thank you very much for that.