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RE: Devination in Dreams (Day 5 of 100)

in #poetry7 years ago

Oh Moe, this is sexy.

I love the aspect of yearning, of pure desire and the way in which you wrap words round the concept.
Dive.
Clawing.
And this Zinger
"The ecstasy of my memories
Allow me to swim in them a little longer" ...whew. :)

This was a delight to read. :)