Poetry #2 - Am I Doing it Right?

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

AM I DOING IT RIGHT?


Am I doing it right?

I’m a bit confused

Still have any expectations to win

When everybody thinks I’m gonna lose.


Am I doing it right?

I’m pretty not sure

Why I am messing up

When I already have the cure?.


Am I doing it right?

I cannot understand

There is still a shining light

In this sin-darkened land.


Am I doing it right?

Yes, my son!

Doesn’t matter who you are

Or what you have done.


Am I doing it right?

That what you supposed to do

But it doesn’t matter to Me

I’ll still gonna be here for you.


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This is a lovely poem....

Am I doing it right?
Then why is the world against me?
Everyone says stop
But my heart says "leave it be"

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