Echoes

[mindfreak]

Flickers, candles...
Gently.
Roars, bangs, loudly.
And the flame flickers
and dies out,
And lands lay lost with
homes now debris.

I can hear you now,
Even while you are million lives away.

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Comments

[intansary]

beautiful girl and beautiful scenery

[mindfreak]

I hope you liked the poem. Thanks!

[husnainali4]

nice.

[mindfreak]

Thanks.

[moeknows]

I enjoyed the fragmented nature of this piece. It gave the feel of fleeting memories. Thanks for sharing.

[mindfreak]

Thank you.

[yosicrespo]

Hello dear friend, I love poetry and this is beautiful congratulations, you have a lot of talent to write.

[mindfreak]

Thank you so much :)

[anonymity5]

Great poem .