Freedom (An Original Poem)

[mindfreak]

Freedom

Up the bumpy hill we
drive
Now I stare at the freedom
tree
At the night train passengers
thrive

And now everyone is absolutely
free
Compared to the giant we seem
so small
Further away we seem so
tall

Oh, dive down the deep
Into the thought sea

See your power
See your strength
But also see your weakness

Be free
Be carefree
But also stay safe
Be confident
and be careful to though.

But there are the times
when you can be doleful
and blithe

Oh yes,
Be free. Stand out.
Look at your heart.
The question is not what you
look at,
but what you see.

---

Thanks for lovely picture, Pixabay

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[somethingsubtle]

Thanks for sharing.

Its a little hard to attach to the images and themes since they meander quite a bit from hills and trees to trains and giants and seas.

[mindfreak]

Thank you :)

[myindonesia]

this is a beautiful one :)

[mindfreak]

Thank you :')

[hotandrandom]

Great poem

[mindfreak]

Thankssss!

[rahul516]

Another awesome poem that really touched the heart. :)

[mindfreak]

Thank you so much :)

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[uglysweater]

My favorite part is,"The question is not what you look at, but what you see." 😊