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RE: All of Us in Our Nooks

in #poetry6 years ago

I enjoyed reading this @d-pend,

I'm pretty sure you enjoyed writing it.

A ruthless spectre, potter's glen
arising with soft westward wind.
Sad silhouette of maker's bliss
to tame me with unfurling kiss.

Far off comment:

Cranny could never fit into the rhythm and rhyme of this poem at all. I wonder how nook and cranny got matched up anyhow.

Just one question...

Are there actually any pedestrians in that neighborhood other than you?