Why would you delete it? It was good. I hope you didn't take my comment as critical. It was good. My reaction was in response to your title which refered to it as "trite". I thought it was actually pretty good, especially the line about the lips.
You can't really delete anything on the blockchain anyway. It's still there somewhere. That's the beauty of it all.
And, Welcome to Steemit! I look forward to seeing you around.
Also, you'll probably get a better welcome if you use the tag #introduceyourself.
I just re-posted it, you can see it on my blog. but thanks! my professors at school really liked that one, it was their favorite.
I just posted another if ya wanna check it out