I really loved the use of jargon in this poem. It adds a cryptic aspect to the poem which makes me want to dig into the mystery.
Don't feel like you need to explain your poem. One of the beautiful things about poetry is how the reader brings their own aspects of the story to the piece, the two together create art. I enjoyed listening to and reading this piece. Good work!
Thank you :) I hope you brought some cool things to it that expanding it into your own world <3