Teardrops of happiness the man who loved me

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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When we first met i saw you smile

You come to me and we talk for a while

You always give that beautiful smile

With you around im into high

Is it love please do tell me?

Come to me and hold my face

We know its love lets both be brave

To always be with you was my desire

You're the man i truly admire

Your eyes that looking at me was genuine

In your eyes i see you care

Now im ready to take the dare

I know your the man that truly mine

I will give you a love that so pure

And i know you would give me same

I dont know why but my heart begin to melt

It is truly love for you that i felt

In front of church we would both knelt

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You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

know your the man that truly mine.
It should be you're the instead of your the.

Awww thank you for correcting me i really appreciate it.