poetry # "Don't expect me to give up loving you" by mrblu

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)


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why am i such a fool?
they say loving you is my biggest mistake
but how can it be wrong?if it feels so right ?
if i ever made a mistake, it's not that i love you,
its thinking that someday you'll love me too.
It's so hard to love someone,It's so hard to
think that I'll never see you again.
Everything is so hard.
How can I stop
loving
you?


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How do I erase what
we had?How do
I tell my heart
not to break,How do
I stop dreaming?How
do I forget your smile?
I don't know how to stop,
I don't know how to forget.
The way my heart loves you,
I never loved this way before.
Why cant you understand?
If I ever asked my heart to quit
It will break into a million pieces
It's just something I'm not capable of
My heart is totally in love with you.
So please don't tell me to stop,
Nothing in this world can explain
how I feel, I can't believe the
love I have for you is so real,
so please Don't
expect me
to give
up loving
you!


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son algo cortos , puedes mejorar amigo

seeehh..amigo..thanks

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Amazing poem! Upvoted. :D

thanks @littlerph

You're welcome!

Nice .. keep it up! Upvoted 👍

thanks @athenabree08,love your poem also

Then do not give up ;)

yup when you hold feelings to someone.fight for it..have faith..^_^

When love is one sided, it is very sad.

Touching poem that definitely is something I can relate to with past relationships and actions. It is hard to find and stay in love when most do you wrong, but constant searching and never giving up shows the path to the one you should be with.

yup your so right @thegoliath ,but sometimes we need to hold on and hoping someday they will know how important we are on there presence and love us unconditionally.

Wow nice poem :)

thanks kabayan

Such great content! Well done.

I like how you turned your love poem into a heart. Really cool and creative :)

Keep it up!

@enazwahsdarb thanks for the wonderful comment

thanks for the constant support @gaman