Poetry - "My Place Back"

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"My Place Back"
Works: Muraz Riksi

I've heard, home is heaven
Place for loving and laughing
Its far from scolding and complaints
Shelter for lonely souls

It turned out all those feelings
It's just a fantasy
Which is usually present in Islamic
Movies Or in a family that upholds

Faith and obedient
Should happiness be judged by matter
Or the abundance of money that accompany?
Unfortunately Faith is just a froth of dreams who pinned the grief

When I remember this age I'll fill the bag with a thousand promises
And crawl away to seek sustenance
Then come back with, bring proof ...
Bireuen, June 08, 2016
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Pikiran 91 / Seniman Bisu
Author Muraz Riksi

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Nice piece. Keep it up

Thanks my brother, this post is my life

home is a haven for every soul. There is the warmth of the family.

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