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RE: Thou Rainy Youth

in #poetry7 years ago

"Wherefore came that
Monochrome villain,
Time, the wearièd procession
Which eats at the edges of
Enthusiasm's red candle?"

Wow, fantastic, just mind blowingly well done. Yes, that is not a real word, but why settle for real words, Dr. suss didn't.

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Thanks a lot!
It's really fun to write in this style.
Glad it was also enjoyable to read :D