Very poignant... You have done it again . Every poem has that one line or thought that lifts it . "Child undone by the wind and rain,......
Once reflected in the sparkle of her brand new eyes,
Have faded beyond memories grasp…"
Beautiful line. So poignantly they express the pain of growing up and the loss of innocence :)
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Thank you my friend.
Your comments make me feel happy that this writing has found appreciation.
Wishing you happiness and excellent health! :-)
my pleasure. You are most welcome :) . You write well :)
Thanks. Sometimes I write better than at other times and visa versa. :-)