UNTIL WE'RE OLD AND GHOST

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Firstly, I want to send a big shout out to my readers, lovers of my poetic dispositions.
You've been the main motivation behind the continuity.
The love and support is much appreciated!

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I did a little editing to fuse two pictures together, hence the dual link for a single image.

Until we are old and ghost you can have my heart
sync your melodia to its thumbing.
the immense demonstration of cash and june.
permit my subtle caress to lit you up until every breathe is burnt out.
the poison in loneliness may race up my veins. So stay with me, until we're old and ghost.

I shudder at your gaze, it peers to observe my fears.
It is like a turbulent sea, when the ashes of my lapses spread in my thought.
If it ever spurs your wrath.
I implore you, squander not your patience.
I want to be with you until we're old and ghost.

THANK YOU FOR SPARING MY PIECE A READ.

Until my next post.

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Hey I am happy I saw your post. It's quite good.
Sadly I don't have much voting power momentarily but I have followed your account and I'll be back for the next posts.
If you enjoy the movies take a look to my profile @moviemeter I write about movies tops there.
Maybe you can follow me back so we can help each other grow. Cheers!

No problem. your comment means equally much to me.
I'll Follow you, right away. Thank you!

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I love the editing,it wasnt obvious that its not original

I did it for you 😚,and I don't know what I'd do if you didn't comment. thank you s'much.

Really?
Blushing

The first I've seen so far to approAch this ghost pic in a poetic way and it's really lovely

Thanks. Tons of idea comes to mind by just staring at that image. Though I never had my aim on the contest. I decided it was a perfect fit for my piece when I went sourcing for images.