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RE: A sand puzzle

in #poetry7 years ago

The surreal nature of this peace lends to its expression.

I could actually feel that sense of crumbling and yet that sense of calm - order in the context of the chaos that looms... even if it all comes full circle to order as it all comes down to a puzzle.

Very well written. :c)

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Many thanks! I was hoping that the word choice would lend itself to such a sense of crumbling and forever changing.

I do find life to be a puzzle with missing pieces here and there that need to be sought after and attained.

Thanks again for reading!