Closure
Closure....Who Needs closure I wonder....
Blood is flowing, yet I can't enjoy one single drop
Life is rushing, hearts beating...
Continue, walk, breathe, inhale, exhale... Continue...
Time, an enemy of us all, watching me in pain and loss.
The burning feeling of explosion in my mind
Killing me softly, slicing me open...
Closure... Who Needs closure I wonder....
To live in a fairy tale of wonders, holding arms for safety..
I now find my self alone in my darkness.
No embrace is strong enough to fill the gap.
I watch myself bleed out in agony trying to fight the brokenness.
Gathering thoughts, remember laughter.
Something to spark my inner fire.
Closure... Who needs closure I wonder.
I made my choice, I spoke my words.
For once, I cared only for me.
Selfish, because that is what I need.
I read the warnings of missing, losing, hating.
I fight the moments that I want to turn back.
My wall of trust, broken...
Closure...Who Needs closure I wonder....
I feel the tears burn in my flesh.
Like a river, they flow from my eyes.
Eyes that once where full of love and trust.
Now all they see is pain and the past that I can't forget.
I know that I tried my best, I have given all I could.
I followed my own heart, I choose me...
My name is @poeticsnake, a creative writer and dreaming poet!
A wandering soul searching for new paths to walk on!
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Poem and artwork both made by @poeticsnake
that's an amazing poetry and great arts work and the sketches are so unique really great talent you had got so keep it up @poeticsnake
Thank you ever so kindly my sweet friend!
I hope you will have a marvelous day!
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Snekky
It's a wonderful poem, and art work. Feelings of recovery.
"I read the warnings of missing, losing, hating.
I fight the moments that I want to turn back.
My wall of trust, broken...
Closure...Who Needs closure I wonder...."
Very strong words of you thanks for sharing.
Thank you for you kind words!
Your support is much appreciated!
Have a marvelous Sunday! May it bring you happiness and love!
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Snekky
this is an amazing poetry and it's got very deep meaning and i really like it alot im been greatful to follow you and had your great post keep it up @poeticsnake
Thank you ever so kindly!
I try to post more poetry again but sometimes I find it hard to get inspired!
BUT... Somehow, I will always find a few free minutes to write down some lines!
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Snekky
Awesome poetry those word are a lesson for a life, which i understand, and wonderful sketch just terrific poem.
Most words written down come from life, at least for me that is!
Thank you ever so kindly for your sweet words!
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Snekky
it's really amazing one and it got amazing deep meaning and im gald to had it @poeticsnake and it's an amazing talent you had got ☺☺
Thank you ever so kindly for your sweet words!
Much appreciated
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Snekky
Beautiful poem with artistic art!!!Your poem is full of moral which I can connect to life easily...I can feel the your thoughts through your poem and art...Keep on posting beautiful poem!!!
Thank you ever so kindly for your amazing support and sweet words!
They are really appreciated!
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Snekky
I really loved you poet it has great meaning and topic too closure it so dashing and great..Glad to see it..@poeticsnake
Thank you ever so kindly!
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Snekky
We got another great poem from you. It’s authentic and original,it’s expressive that even for someone who is not used to understanding poems can get some of what the poem means. thanks for sharing. It’s really good. Keep it up.you are one of the most artistic person i have ever seen and hardworking.i hope you’ll get fame and appreciation soon.
Dáawww Thank you so so much for your kind words!
Much appreciated :D
Have a fantastic day!
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Snekky
Another dark side of the @poeticsnake's feelings. Nice poem at all! I know your heart is flying as a bird but your creative side is so wide.. Thanks for sharing. Hugs from @funworlding :)
Thank you for your super support like always!
Much appreciated!
I hope you are doing well and the sun is shining for ya!
here.... Brrrrrrrrrrr and rain!
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Snekky
Yes, +22C today, like summer! :) But few days ago here was cold, too... it was about +12-13C!
I have published another post on my blog and wrote about my first month on steemit. Thanks for your brilliant support! :)
These lines expressed your pain quite well. I love how you had a repeating line (seems to be a common theme this week) and in the end, it changed. The change makes the last line feel that much more empowering since it broke the cycle.
Thank you ever so kindly!
Yes, I have seen it a lot this week!
I think I use it a lot in my poetry, kinda a thing a Like to do!
And then flip at the end just because thats cool! :D
Thank you for your reply!
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Snekky
@poeticsnake, I think you deserve a Nobel Prize on Poetry. cuz how you come about this lines, I honestly cant phantom.
The best person to love You is You. Nobody would love you as much as you love yourself. It hurts to love someone and do not get love in return.
thanks @poeticsnake for sharing
Aaawwww man that is the sweetest thing I have ever been told about my poems!
Thank you ever so kindly!
Much appreciated!
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Snekky
Amazing poem, the artwork is intriguing, which medium did you use?
Thank you ever so kindly!
I made the drawing first on paper without a pupil in the eye.
Then I scanned it, used a few filters in an app, and added a pupil and then more filters. I honestly forgot which filters but like 6 at least in this drawing!
For the drawing I used a black marker and ecoline watercolor brushpens.
It's lovely because I'm obsessed with drawing the perfect eye and it looks perfect :)
Once, poets were magicians. Poets were strong, stronger than warriors or kings, stronger than old hapless gods. And they will be strong once again.
Excellent thought,brillent poem,salute to you
Keep sharing👍👍❤
Thank you for your amazing reply!
Much appreciated!
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Snekky
My pleasure thanks
hiii @poeticsnake dear, you showed here your artistic skills for sharing great piece of artwork. and the poetry is outstanding realy every word is heart touching,. love it
THank you so so much @rabeel!
Always a warm moment to read your words!
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Snekky
This is amazing snekkyyyy
awesome poetry n art it is amezing 😊
Excellent poem @poeticsnake.
Thank you!
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Snekky
Nice post ..i like your every post.thanks for sharing..@poeticsnake
i liked in your poetry my friend
Thank you ever so kindly!
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Snekky
that's an amazing poetry and great arts work
Thank you kindly!
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Snekky
really heart touching poetry and i just love it keep writing the poet you are just great on poetry @poeticsnake keep it up
Great post..Loved the poet it was wonderful and wonderfut art too in there..You have wrote amazing poet you are very talented..@poeticsnake
When art is combined with poem or music this time the real meaning is coming more tasty.
Our hearts are whispers, eyes always reflects true.. right? :)
Great combination!
WoW such a great poetry with a great art...you are multi talented snekky.thanks for sharing.
very interesting poetry Mam!! beautiful artistic work awesome.
Love your work!! :)
nice I like with your words
nice post.. I like your all post because it's creative post.. Thanks for sharing us and keep supporting me @poeticsnake
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It's not really a cool thing to do what you just did here! Dumping your links on other peoples post without even giving a reason! This is reason to be flagged! Keep that in mind!
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A very beautiful poem, I was forced to dissolve in while reading your poem ...
Thank you for sharing @poeticsnake
I am just loving these deep lines @poeticsnake Wonderful usage of vocabulary and choice of words <3 <3
Thanks alot for these amazing myth of life the great Soul :)
That was what struck me most. I do not consider it selfish choosing ourselves over others. It is self-love, a good requirement if we want to share the love to others.
Those lines somehow touches me. Very Deep and amazing poetry. Keep it up..... @poeticsnake
Nice poem and artwork! Upvoted :)
Everyone needs closure Snekky :) Sometimes you need to be selfish... to persevere yourself. Great Art Work and Poetry again. Lovely ....
i love it
Good work, hope to read more!!
love and hugs there is no closure on something we never wished to end.
the eyes are the window of the soul, through it one looks at the feeling and essence of a person, a glance can unleash passion or hell.