I love the line about suicide being glamorous. It made me chuckle! It's ironic, how when the brain takes over the mind and creates chaos, it comes back to threaten the brain. Maybe that's not what you meant, but I guess that's the art of poetry - allowing the reader to interpret it as his perception does. The rocking chair was a great add/imagery as well!
Thank you! My favorite part of poetry is hearing what others interpret it as; Ultimately, it is an interaction between the writer and the reader, not just the writer.
Yes. I think that's what I love about Steemit so much. On other sites all I get is "thank you" and "keep going" or "appreciate it", here many people seem willing to interact. Also, it was kinda funny that while you were commenting on my post I was reading yours (haha, ok maybe not that funny...just a coincidence)