Oh thank you! I hope to create a poem which will make an impact to peoples lives and way of thinking but it always ends up as a sad one -_- or maybe it's just the way how I perceive it?
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Oh thank you! I hope to create a poem which will make an impact to peoples lives and way of thinking but it always ends up as a sad one -_- or maybe it's just the way how I perceive it?
I think the first stanza can be a little sad but its a nice build up because the rest of the poem really gives off a feeling of power and motivation. i really liked it. You are already impacting people :) keep honing your skills. You have a great talent