Love it! I have always been an avid lover of poetry. I write as well. I am trying to get back into it. It has been many years...I could feel the depth and invoking of emotion in this. My favorite lines "Render me ageless By the churning of The axle of belief Until inversion Becomes my Salve."
Hi @rachael87, I'm grateful for your comment! I was in your position about 5 months ago when I decided to try writing/posting one poem every day. It had been a couple of years since I'd been writing poetry, so I felt really rusty. But Steemit has been the perfect outlet for me to share the journey and hold myself accountable to keep practicing.
That's really cool that you liked that line, as I thought it was one of the more obscure/difficult of the piece. Anyway, if you end up starting to write again and decide to post anything on here, feel free to drop a comment with a link and I'd love to read your stuff. Have a great day and thanks for stopping by!
I posted my first poem on my blog.