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RE: Haiku [ITA/ENG]

in #poetry6 years ago

There is a beautiful resonance to your Haiku @f3nix
And a fantastic economy of words that your Haiku always exhibit, there is never any extraneous noise with too many clanging adverbs and yammering adjectives taking up all the space.

Great stuff :-)

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First of all thank you for another precious comment, my friend. I enjoy the minimalism and absence of judgement.. The 3-5-3 structure, instead of the 5-7-5, not only is feasible in English but also more appropriate. Now I can develop a poetry for every haiku... I should start first or after ;-)