RE: The Wizard of Harst

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raj808 (75)in #poetry • 7 years ago

I really like the thought of this wizard getting his just-deserts in the end.

evil spreading headlong
swarming earthbound

I like your choice of words (swarming) in the revision. Fits well with the evil feel of the spells unleashing. Nice!

7 years ago in #poetry by raj808 (75)

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jrswab (66) 7 years ago

Thanks raj!

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