Pandemonium Neo

[redsfallin]

Hi all you wonderful Steemians out there and in here,

I had a really big surge to write. I had planned on reading some posts not creating ones own post. But when I first came onto Steemit for the day, I checked my replies first and received a surprising and amazing comment fueled in motivation.

So I would like to give a shout out to @geechidan for the great encouragement I am sure I wrote this just so one could breathe from the overwhelming sense of when some one shows compliments with delicate touch as this.. Again Thank you for the motivation..

I am working lots on gaining all tools to truly come on here and show you what I am here to do.. Until then though I hope you enjoy this flowing poem one has created...!!

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I'ma pandemonium cannon,
Wrapped in this shell full of calming,
Actions, packed with calamity,
For you ego brain spagetti monster,
Comically combat chronic,
Dysfunctional dissonances,
I ain't out here, up there,
Back in this space dissing,
Merely expressing feelings,
These matters of all of ones,
To me doing this is to much fun,
I am forever young,
Adult child like wonder,
Wondering when will,
Will be the thing that leads you,
Spit lava water down throats,
Reply quickly in direct,
Directly into your chest,
I know, so no need to be blessed,
I Stay researching this english,
We spew and throw up Shit,
Just that fecal matter,
I know your a being that matters,
Heart was locked,
But uncased and forever free,
To all that have those ears,
And your visual cortex's,
I think with the silence,
Speak with a breath,
That is quivering blood,
From a form internal floods,
Out and you and I,
Both become the one,
They all called Neo..

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Comments

[geechidan]

Dope bro. I like that. I've mentioned the Neo concept in the past. The one searching, but has already found, the one questioning but already has the answers. Good stuff

[redsfallin]

Thanks and thank you... tomorrow I get a mic......
Oh Snatch! and give it to me please and now.....
haha!!

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[marzukie]

Your very poetic language, embracing profound meaning, varies in sacrifice.
it is your great motivation to build a performance by building relationships within the community.
Thanks for sharing @redsfallin

[redsfallin]

Thank you for the excellent remarks and amazing insight!!
#cof

[hafiz34]

Poetry comes from the highest happiness or the deepest sorrow-A. P. J. Abdul Kalam

Which one in you?

[sostrin]

Real Nice. I couldn't help but hear a beat in my head as I read this. I wonder what it would sound like with a fat groove behind it

[redsfallin]

Yea this one I think I am going to have to come back to and put it with a beat!!