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RE: To My Daughter On Her First Birthday

in #poetry5 years ago

Aw, beautiful. That tension between love and fear... motherhood is something SPECIAL. I hope you have handwritten this to keep for her xx

PS seized = grabbed. Ceased = stopped. Hope you don't mind this tiny correction on your lovely heartfelt poem! 💚❤💚❤💚❤💚❤

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Thanks so much. It's one hell of a ride hey. All I know is I appreciate my mom and all moms so much more.

I'm toying with preservation strategy. Think creating her an email account might be a good start.

Thanks for the tip. You are completely correct. Don't know why I didn't see it. Guess typing from my phone...