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6 years ago in #poetry by rok-sivante (77)
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In the above sentence I believe.. But sometimes, we are not patient enough to allow the now pass in order to redeem the future.. The future is like pregnancy, how you react to it and care about it, can result in either joy or sorrow...
Lovely Piece Mr @rok-sivante
Hola que buena imagen,con tan solo imagínenselo al estar hay todos, paz y tranquilidad.
Beautiful verse here, this reminds me of the fact that your use of paradox is simply amazing in almost every verse of this poetic piece, there is a ounce of paradox.
The verse above got me thinking, sometimes in our darkest dissapointment we discover something very good by serendipity. Sometimes we face inner inclacerations but on the long ruby it brings us freedom and relief, it's not all negativity that seems pure negative. A seed needs to die before it's reborn into a plant. Awesome piece Rok
You have rightly said that if we give up worrying then our self-confidence can be increased.
By condemning, the inferiority complex of human beings is manifested, and if we fail now, then the reason for this is on others.
We have to immerse ourselves in the depths of our inner intuition to know ourselves.
Very interesting to post, a very accurate poem and consonance with reality, @rok-sivante.
Nice write up,it's educative and speaks about the reality of life and i've learned from it,please I'll be expecting more of this lovely write up from you.
I've upvoted and follow you,please kindly do that to my recent posts also.thanks
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You have correctly written that the whole heart of surrender is a symbol of faith.