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RE: Beauty in Blue

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

always awesome. i comment with this

When the sea hit by sunshine
glittering light flooded the sky
then the wind invites dancing at the end of the horizon
to form a rainbow of desire to work
then invite your mind and understanding to the gates of success

when the waves pounded the barrier reef
then erase all lazy and hesitant to walk to the top
achieve mutual success
achieve dreams that never conveyed
then wake up to the reality of life
where the gate is wide open
until you will see the winding road but beautiful because walking through it is a process of maturing
until the traces we leave will be remembered all the time
then we will always be able to smile broadly

warm regard from Indonesia