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RE: Golden Emotions

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Always awesome. i comment with this word

when words slid from the lips
I see through the window of your heart
so that a pockmarked face with a lie can be avoided
so that the false smile can be so neutralized as honesty
hypocrisy will melt with my stare straight
because I've found a recipe for emotion

when the heart, feelings and thoughts come together
no more obstacles are blocking
all destroyed like an iceberg struck by a meteor
until the top of pride will be a valley full of love

with an open heart
our conscious mind goes and finds self awareness
until all emotions can be controlled properly
then you will find a lake of feelings full of true love

warm regard from Indonesia

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