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RE: Signs of Love

in #poetry7 years ago

NICE POST
your diction always deep and meaningful. I comment with this

the surge in the chest pumps the heart with a storm of passion
not just miss the hidden, but the cyclone to meet the desires
because love is not just a word
but the real work that will always be done with responsibility
the sign of love is not just a breeze that lulls
but the stern wind that drives us to play the spirit of work
because the door of love is open until we will enter the world from all sides
fill the plate of love and a spoonful endlessly dear.
gulp of a longing cup that will always accompany
as a spiritual food; which never runs out
with a sign of love that increasingly imprint then will be able to remove the suffering of love whack
until that is felt is just happy

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