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RE: Poem / Through the fire and the flames

in #poetry7 years ago

nice poem man, good question is who can take the fire... :/
But when you find someone you love you fight to protect what you have. Its when you don't like your other poem said the strings detach and then create gaps/spaces. Love shouldn't allow this, if it does its not worth it!
Cool poem! followed :)

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Very true man :) I appreciate it