There once was a Peach.

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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There once was a peach,
It went to the beach,
For it required some water.

When it got there,
So much salty air,
Was met with much hauteur.

A person it loved,
Came running with shove,
And squashed it such slaughter.

Torn flesh was abound,
Peach screamed with no sound,
When sweet juice hit salty water.

Just a bit of fun for @juliakponsford contest about love. love and peaches.

Thanks for reading, hope you all have a fantastic day. Much love. <3


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Great friend, regards @sammosk

Greatt You Have Good Post I like Your post,
Just to Upvote you @sammosk

Thank you, have a peach. <3

No.. LOL
can You Teach me ?

Lol awesome peaches will inspire a million poems! Thank you for your entry 🍑🍑🍑

Rain down a million peaches! <3

I want to see a peach thunderstorm that would be something!

You are a total peachjob sammo. <3

I found it fun to write. :D <3

I found it fun to read :D <3

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Nice - but now I think I will feel bad for eating a peach :)

Dang ! Now I have to eat a peach ^_^
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Keep the peach love alive my peach bro! Love always from your peach family! 😊😘🍑🍑🍑❤

Peach is love, peach is eternal

Peachy!!!! Now you got me thinking about peach poetry! How dare you!!! You should know I am having my own love affair with cherries right now.

Upped and Steemed. Who could resist?

Oh my!!! I need to get some more peaches to balance this out.

Just don't squeeze mine too tight!

haha, cute man :-D

Good one @sammosk! :)

Peachy....

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why the fuck would you ever do this to me man? I was sitting here thinking of peaches and salt in my mouth.. WHYYYYYY!??!?!?!?

Bahahahahahahah!!!

@sammosk Man your beautiful peach inspired poem is warming my kernels, thanks for sharing!

egads, violent love, sounds a bit final, but peaches don't have long lives after all.
I think seven out of nine peaches don't make their first birthday

Made me giggle as the first thing you said on discord was along the lines of

care for a peach ?

=)

Hehe, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Where does the love of peach originate from ??:)

It's so soft, fruity, sweet, kind, loving, round, peach is everything! <3

Did I mention juicy!?

Ok I cant argue with that, but one things for sure ... They gotta be ripe!!! Left on the window for a couple of hours !