I grieve the loss of you
Even though you’re not dead
Yet quite alive
And well fed
As you sleep well
Content with the things that have been said
I hope you mourn my absence
As I do yours.
^ Sammy-Marie Grimm
I think many of us can relate to a relationship that has been broken and having to grieve for that person in one point in our lives... For example, I wrote this poem about my father who has abandoned me and our relationship.. As I wrote this poem I realized that so many people relate to it and that's why I'm so inspired to share it!
I hope you enjoy my poetry! This is one of the poems that will be featured in my book, releasing this year!! I'm so excited because this has been a big dream of mine since I was 8 years old! I'm looking forward to hearing what you guys think!
Thank you for all your love and support <3
XO,
Sammy-Marie <3
Some times your best poetry comes from your deepest pain. This is a really good one. Thanks for sharing.
Yes I agree! Thank you so much! <3
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Excellent work, thanks for sharing.
thank you so much! <3
Nice poem... i think it wants to express pain of love and absences of lovers..
thank you!!!
Thank you, i love poetry !
thank you!!
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Very nice work. I'm intrigued. I know there's so much more there to explore. Your piece has only scratched the surface. :)
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thank you so much I really appreciate that <3
There are some absences that our souls will always yearn to fill. You poem captures that emotion. When your book's release date gets close, let us know.