Those Thoughts - Original poetry

[samvan]

Those Thoughts

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original poetry by @samvan
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Hello Steemians! I decided to give you some poetry today. Words have been pouring out of me lately. This is my first poem ever, and it came to me while trying to meditate. I would love to hear what you think.

Those Thoughts

Those Thoughts,
which incessantly forage
for space in my cognition,
know no satiation.
Even at midnight's faint hue
or high noon shimmer,
they forage.

Thieves of true connection.

How long must this struggle ride?
I feel, a lifetime inside—
outside.

I remember those Watchers,
waiting to be of aid.
Feeling and forgiving
my Self to live.

Comments

[yeninsfer]

@samvan I really liked it. Your thoughts are very pleasant. Those thoughts that allow us to reach into the unknown. You have to feed your thoughts and make them concrete to see this beautiful and beautiful result. Big hug, buddy. Don't be too far away. That my thoughts miss you. Happy day. Happy day.💞💕💖🎸

[samvan]

I hear you @yeninsfer!

[codingman]

the sound of mind! ^^

[samvan]

Exactly! It’s getting to the spirit that’s the tough part

[balticbadger]

Thieves of true connection.

I enjoyed it! Keep it up!

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[samvan]

Thank you:) we will see where it goes from here!

[carlosp2910]

Wonderful words to feed the soul

[samvan]

May the words feed the soul to nourish the needs demanded of it in order to speak louder than Those Thoughts.