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RE: January 18th, 2018 | Winter's Chaotic Trip of 2k17(8)

in #poetry7 years ago

hey kristves, loved the flow of this piece, some great word choices.

"No snowballs to throw,
no blocked streets to plow...''
Yet, winter still answered
with an apathic ''So?''

love this bit, keep doing more poetry.

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I really appreciate the feedback!Thank you, @sapphic.