@ravenking23 thanks, I feel the same, I always like the rawness, I find it hard to edit much out of first drafts and what not, I always like the chop up nature this has, where my mind wanders, I let the mind dance with my thoughts and feelings, but am glad you dig it.
P.S. For reality is perfectly imperfect <3
And I love the primordial rawness of authentic nature, so it resonates deeply your texts :D