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RE: 10SBD poetry contest (my first kiss) by @steemhive

in #poetry7 years ago

The moment his lips touched mine, feeding my yearns;
I felt the electricity, firing my nerves.

By the way, i wont mind giving you the second kiss. It will be far much better than d first kiss that only gave you only electricity firing in ur nerves... The second kiss, will give you both lightning and thunder storm in your nerves... 😂

But, really d poem is lovely, wishing you the best in the contest..

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Hehehehe. You are very funny and pleasant to read. Thank you so much for stopping by. We might do that second kiss🤔

Looking forward to it.. Our euronation poet.. Happy Sunday.

Happy new week dear.