NIce :) I will post some poems too, so you can check them later.
Only one thing I have to say about this poem. You should try not to ran away from rhyme :D Rhyme is a good friend of any poem, even if it is rarely put inside the poem, here and there :) But all in all, nice work!
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I hardly ever rhyme in my poems. Never liked it. If it happens most likely it is organic. Thanks for reading. Looking forward to read yours. Will follow you. :)